Ever felt like a bottle?
shattered to pieces;
jagged edges that hurt like hell.
Only to people who got hurt by it,
one would think.
Did anyone ever think,
how it felt to be the glass?
Not knowing why, for getting broken
in the first place.
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That is beuatiful. and very profound.
Beautifully written, thats why I say a lil bit of empathy can go a long way towards making everyone's life easier
I wrote this from a bottle's perspective...
Be it medicine or liquor,
I served mankind during their needy hour.
Not long ago was I fully filled,
I now stand empty and purpose fulfilled.
Here I am broken and down,
Anger and Agony making me drown.
I am lying on the ground without care,
Waiting for the sweeper to dispose me somewhere.
Alas my wait has turned futile,
And I end up hurting everyone with vile...
@m - thanks. :-)
@rohan - You are right there! Correct paraphrasing.
@anusha - wow! That's damn good. With rhyme and rhythm as well.
You rock, ma'am!
Thanks Srini :)
I dabble at poetry sometimes...
oooo, deep thoughts. good one.
so tell me why did you go break a bottle? ;-p
Wow! poet veraya neenga...hmm. It is awesome, good job!
@anusha - poet! that's cool.
@rads - I didn't break the bottle. That much I will say.
And I thought the post title was a giveaway! :-)
@shankari - இங்த கிண்டல் தானே வேண்டாங்கறது!
@prema - :-)
alavu theriyAma thanni adichuttu... bodaila glass odachu kuthikitteengalA... bodhaila thAn kavidhai kottumnu kElvi patrukkEn... ippo thAn pAkkarEn...
Nicely done... the photo and the words.
@olive - What's a peg? Is that the stake that holds up a tent?
@paravai - Glad to know that you are alive!! Now go update your blog and come online.
@casa - Thanks dude! Photo isn't mine, though.
Yes I know, but still :)
PS: Dont call me 'dude'!
Good thought provoking lines...
Aaha! Enakku ipdiyellaam kavidha yezhudha varaliye!!!
Nice one dude !! I hope somebody drank the wine before breaking the bottle:)
@casa - okay!
@bayarea - Thanks!
@me too - :-)
@point5 - lol. Never thought this.
Just wow!
@little cow & anu - Thanks!
That was a wonderful post!
Loved it!
@dee - Thank you! :-)
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